In present society, people like to copy movies stars and fashion advocator. They believe that they are prominent and attractive. These stars and advocators rule models in our lives. Other models could be people who have benevolent virtue. Some one says, learning models is worth in our life, because it can promote our life quality, expense our horizon and improve our virtue. At the other hand, some people say, learning models will restrict our mind, lifestyle. Even now this argument still does not have solution. My answer to this is people should study models’ advantages.
Some people say learning models will restrict people. That is true. People like molding models’ actions, cloths and speaking. People will lose their styles after they copy their modes long time. There are many examples. Joy is a so famous singer in Asia. His hot fans always copy his actions cloth styles and even his speaking pronunciations. That is such boring world, if everybody wears similar clothes, does similar actions and speaks with similar pronunciation. Furthermore, People do not just lose their own styles, but also lose their creativity. One day human lose their creativity, they will be outmoded.
By constrict, people learn models will help them to promote their lives quality, to expense their horizons and to improve their virtues. Learning models’ advantages and the shine side in their lives. In ancient China, sages were people with high-level virtue and to get high-level esteem from other people. These are real great people with shine in their hearts, but not like some stars and fashion advocators with shine on their surface. Furthermore, when everyone can study models who have virtues, this world will be much better than now.
People should study models, to study their virtue and advantages. Also, people should try to avert models’ disadvantages. If people can do this, society will be better.
Thursday, March 26, 2009
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Hm... good length... good attempt to use vocabulary... however, watch your spelling!!!!
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You really need to work on knowing how to use the parts of speech - you need to figure out how to change words from nouns to verbs to adjectives to adverbs..... they really stop the reader from reading.
I think, in generally, your ideas are great, but because the grammar is distracting, the readers have a hard time concentrating.
Look over what you've written and see if you can fix it up a little! Keep working at it! You are doing a great job!
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